the girl who died

• Artist: vanessa_m
• Description: i dont know....i wrote it in class....so yea
• Date: 04/02/2009
• Tags: girl died suicided

I walk to my room and lock the door.
My legs give out and i fall to the floor.
I start to cry, alittle too loud.
And then I hear a knocking sound.

Before they can talk, I blast my CD.
Thinking to myself, I can finally be free.
I start to remember the good times i had.
and wondered, when did my life become so sad.

Why was my life no longer fun?
I reached under my bed and grabbed my gun.
Without even thinking i put it to my head.
Pulled the trigger, and this girl was dead.

Comments

[MrEmmaWatson]

i feel a hugee burst of emotion comin outta this cool 5/5

[DeCrazySheep]

lol nice.
oh shiza that makes me kinda' sick to laugh at something like this no?
oh well.
He hehe he heee you haz no head.

But seriously I like it, short rough and edgy, I would've liked a little more meat to chew on though.
But hey, it made me giggle.
4/5

[Hot pink Killer07]

Wicked my kind of poem crying

check out my depressing poem: thinking of suicide