Black canvas

• Artist: jizzguzzler
• Description:
• Date: 03/31/2009
• Tags: black canvas

I have no idea why you sit with me. I have no idea why you look at me.
I am just words simple prose. Written on a black canvas.
I have no special meaning. I have no hidden depth.
I am just words. Simple prose. Written on a black canvas.
When I was little I dreamed of sitting with someone like you.
But I never thought it would ever really happen.
It was just a dream to keep me breathing.
Yet here you are. Sitting with me. Looking at me.
You are the most amazing thing I have ever seen.
I am completely bewildered. I am completely overwhelmed.
I have no idea why you are sitting with me.
I have no idea why you are looking at me.
I am just words. Simple prose. Written on a black canvas.

Comments

[x_b r 0 k 3 n]

good.. but not enough... 3/5.. ^_^

[wylie dufresne]

I really like the use of repetition,
and I can feel the emotion in
the way you wrote it. very nice.

much better than half the lame
love poems written in the arenas.