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Time could walk past us and we'd never know it
Time could punch us in the arm and we'd never feel it
Time could call us every name under the Sun and we'd never hear it
If it were so great to be invisible
Why isn't time what we respect
Because time was never God
It was something that became reality
Whether we liked it or not
Everything we do matters with time
We cry because time caused things to happen
We die because time comes to an end for us
When we sit down and think about what time really is
We realise that it's not God
It's not human
It's life
And in time
We'll see what life is all about
- by BabiixDevil |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/25/2009 |
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- Title: Time
- Artist: BabiixDevil
- Description: Exactly what the title suggests^^
- Date: 03/25/2009
- Tags: time
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Anime13Chick - 03/27/2009
- I totally agree. This poem is beautiful! In your description you make the title sound like it's the worst in the world, but I like your title. It's so frank. Anyway, great poem! SO much better than mine!
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- rocko11091 - 03/26/2009
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oh no...i respectfully disagree...i see exactly what she's saying...
Very nice poem....again...another poem well done....pretty much same style, another great concept, and a great flow...again...figurative language would be nice...maybe some more imagery...but i like it....well done
Concept: 5/5
Style: 5/5
Flow: 4/5
Fig. Lang./Imagery: 4/5
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- Roboticyouth - 03/25/2009
- fate maybe? but not time.
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