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A man of scars, is a man of tales
A man of adventure, is the one who sails
across obstacles, never to fail
on a sea of wonder, stories to tell
and if he is corrupt, may he fall under
a deep depth of sorrow, as his ship sunders
in plunders until, his tears drop
to the very floor where,his fears had mopped
full of pain he may suffer
what doesnt kill us , makes us tougher
to celebrate his success, may he enjoy the finest ale
A man of scars is a man of tales
-Cobalt_fang (me)
- Title: Waterfall
- Artist: Loki xz
- Description: Waterfall
- Date: 03/23/2009
- Tags: tales wars warrior dreams
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Sexual Watermelons - 09/07/2009
- The rhythm and rhyme scheme are both inconsistent.
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- Nyett - 04/04/2009
- Woah, the poem even rhymed for an even better effect! =D It's AWESOME! whee
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- Sunafire - 03/24/2009
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Try and make the punctuation more consistent, and you'll be fine smile
It's a nice poem though, some nice imagery. - Report As Spam