My Angel

• Artist: Cutey_Pink_Doll
• Description: About Angel X]
• Date: 03/21/2009
• Tags: angel

My Angel

My angel is the one who looks over me
My angel is the who cares for me
My angel is the one who loves me
My angel has beautiful brown eyes
My angel has beautiful black hair
My angel will be there when I get hurt
My angel will be the one that is always on my mind
He is the angel that keeps me breathing
He is the angel of my dreams
He is the angel that keeps me alive
My angel will cheer me up when I’m sad
My angel will love me for me
He is my angel of my life

Comments

[Danna Amamus]

If you ever consider revising this piece, maybe you should look at potentially altering the sound of it, like:

My angel __________
He is the angel ___________
My angel ___________
He is the angel _________

I think the interlude of "He is" is seemingly random in the center of the piece and I felt it was distracting. Other than that - good job!

[Black_lily_27]

cute
^^