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what do you do when smiles fade away?
when everything changes within one day?
what do you do when love falls through?
when the one you love doesnt love you?
- by hellsweetlife |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/15/2009 |
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- Title: Gone
- Artist: hellsweetlife
- Description: this is just peom i wrote a long time ago. i hope you all enjoy it
- Date: 03/15/2009
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- Hyper Shion - 08/31/2010
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Poetry has no rules.
Doesn't matter how long it is.
I liked it.
5/5 - Report As Spam
- Lady Messmer - 05/26/2009
- Omg...I felt rly identified with it! 5/5 wink although I admit Its kinda short, check out my work or add me and I´ll give you some tips ^_^
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- Lunlulocklomenlu - 03/15/2009
- try and make it longer..
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