Lost {False Reality}

• Artist: Xx_JoN_xX_66
• Description: I used to be very emotional, and I've dealt with depression all my life. Still am, kinda, and I use writing [and also music] as outlets for my emotions. One day while spacing out in school, I had a day dream of wandering in a neverending desert of nothingness, and started writing things down on paper. This is also an expression of my own questioning of life and reality. This is what I came up with - hope you like it.
• Date: 03/07/2009
• Tags: questioninglife questioningreality expression

I wander alone, through the sands of time.
Lost forever, in my own mind.
Death come quick, for I can live no longer.
The hurt inside, growing ever stronger.
Reality is an illusion - created by my head.
What becomes of reality when I am dead?
Does it shrivel up and die, like I?...
... or does it continue on, forward through time?
Reality is a figment of my imagination;
a thought in my head - my own creation.
What is reality, and what is real?
How does one define real? - is it what one sees, thinks, hears, or feels?
Questionable thoughts of everything, filling my brain...
Beginning to wonder if I'm insane...
But what is insanity, but a state of mind?
However my mind will be gone when I have died...
To me, reality is no more - locked behind a solid door.
So when my mind shrivels up and dies, reality will be gone...
... and so will I.

Comments

[Grim Intentions]

I agree, it had a good flow, again, it wasn't great, but i enjoyed parts, search my stuff, look at some stuff i wrote. good but not gret.

[Silently_Die_By_You]

nice, it had a good flow to it and an honest message. 4/5

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Rather cliche, but passable. Not amazing, but I kind of enjoyed it. 2.5/5.