Just a moment...

• Artist: hadezs7
• Description: A poem I made that made while feeling really down... I know everything I write is sad lol.... Any ways please dont leave a comment if you have nothing good to say...
• Date: 03/04/2009
• Tags: just moment

Just a moment to take your life
Just a moment to end your strife
Just a moment to live your life
Just a moment to live through the night
Just a moment to take your blade and follow through
Just a moment to get a gun say good bye to the sun
Just a moment to show you are through with this world we are in
Just a moment to Just a moment to Just a moment to
Yah! Just a moment to!
Just a moment to show your blood
Just a moment to make the blade fall
Just a moment to hear the body fall
Just a moment to make the call
Just a moment to live your life
Just a moment to end your strife
Just a moment to lose all you love
Just a moment to fall to the floor
Just a moment to lose control
Just a moment to lose the fight
Just a moment to finish your life...
Yah! Just a moment! Yah! Just a moment! Yah!
Just a single god damn moment to ******** up youe life to make you leave the light....Yah..!Just one moment....To end it all... to leave the pain....Just left dead and drained....

Comments

[alice baby17]

Love the poem (poetically speaking)not proud of the message its sending. considering its a common feeling amoung myself. Never the less you know you can't go through with any of it. I'll get into details when we talk again. But its very powerful. keep righting and posting your poetry. You have a God given gift even if it seems like he is being cruel to you he has truely blessed you with this gift smile

[Lord Bubbleygirl]

Wow it is very powerful,but please don't do any of that!!! I know there is pain but please don't go through with that. It will only bring more upon you, and your friends and family around you. Whatever pain your feeling dont make it worse. If you are doing what you wrote, u are only making things worse.
someone who cares

[queen siva]

nice