Shoes

• Artist: dutchbrosdude
• Description: This poem is about shoes, it's a hiku poem. Tell me if you like it or not, and enjoy.
• Date: 03/01/2009
• Tags: shoes feet legs hiku poem

Shoes

Stylish foot friends.

The shopping necessity.

They protect your feet.

Comments

[Psilocybin Realizations]

I'm pretty sure 'stylish' is only two syllables, people just pronounce it with three. If so, that would make it 4,7,5...
Besides that, this isn't much of a Haiku. it's a Senryu. anyway. I don't like the topic 'shoes'. 2/5

[Uri-Lone]

Its funny! I like it. 4/5 ^-^