The box

• Artist: destorer3
• Description: It is about a box and its darkside
• Date: 02/28/2009
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Picture this, a voice inside a box.
A white box. And its your voice.
Slowly as you speak the words, "pain."
The box slowly turns black. Then every thing is black.
The box, slowly starts to fade back to white.
Then slowly knifes go into the box.
The voice, your voice slowly fades away.
The box, turns to dust and blows into the darkness.

Comments

[Rain Duvell]

Dark... I like it. I think I would have loved it though if it was a rhyming poem. 5/5 anyway, Good Work