Love

• Artist: XxTwilight_01xX
• Description: I don't really know why I wrote this. People have been saying that my poems are pretty good so far. All of them have gotten a 4 or higher I think. Remember, I just began writing poems so plz try not 2 be too harsh with your comments....The part where it says, "Just remember that that love comes from high above," I"m talking about how God gives you love and how he wants you to give love back to him as well as other people.
• Date: 02/27/2009
• Tags: love heart relationships

Love is the ability to care for someone deeply.
To give them everything that's in you.
Let them know your there for them.
Because they're there for you, too.

Love is the passion you let out.
It's what makes the world go round.
It keeps nature in balance,
and it has only one sound.

No one knows what that sound is.
You have to figure that out for yourself.
Love is a gift.
Love is not something that magically appears on a shelf.

I hope everyone finds that special someone,
and when you do, they'll shine like the sun.
Give love, Take love, Breath love, and Love love.
Just remember that that love comes from high above.

Comments

[goodcharlotte007]

you should really think about the rhyming thing, not too much but just enough to where u found my inner side, thnx 5/5! ur pretty good, just take alitle bit of thought and more care, *winks* see ya

[Renlio]

nice