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She's on the edge of sanity
and at the edge of death.
That reality's full of pain.
For her ther's nothing left.
She plans to jump, to end it all.
Just ten little steps and it could be
done.
She could close her eyes, count to three
get ready, get set, run.
She is there, ready to end it all
No-one could stop her, it was her call.
She steps foward. just eight more steps.
she steps forward again.
Just seven steps, so few, till her end.
Five, four, three more steps.
She grows weak as she inches on.
Two, one, she's at her last step.
She takes another, then she's gone.
- by pixistix666 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/25/2009 |
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- Title: Ten Steps
- Artist: pixistix666
- Description: Sad, yes. Funny, no.
- Date: 02/25/2009
- Tags: depressing suicide death
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Comments (4 Comments)
- eoz101 - 01/13/2010
- freakish but good i like 5/5
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- Kurai-Purple - 03/02/2009
- it's a dark and sad tale about how crule and mean the world this is. I LOVE IT!
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- shaydi-freaky-vampire - 03/01/2009
- kk well since i'm a poet as well...i think that that was really good lolz
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- King of Trash - 02/25/2009
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Possibly the most morbid poem I have read.
I like it. 5/5. - Report As Spam
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