Recent feelings.

• Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
• Description: Read on...
• Date: 02/24/2009
• Tags: recent feelings

As the smile slowly fades away from its home
My face, it's lover of all has broken to roam
Replaced by a scowl, as the light begins to wither
To hum a familiar tune as I grow cold and bitter

Stark contrast from the delightful days in memory
Allocating a black contract of venomous misery
Shooting decrepit stares into ethereal oblivion
Riddled with misanthropic hate-bred dominion

Torment of whispers from a blind eye to see
Projecting anger for all aspects of society
The entire human race is the butt of my rage
Approaching vehemence within the last stage

Wielding tainted blades of cynical reproach
Stoic assassin of sympathetic encroach
Butchering the last cherub amongst love
this new-found inner fury fits as a glove

In its welcoming comfort is a bit sickening to see
Rabid heralding streaks of glowering apathy
For each tragedy so experienced in simple vision
Que for unleashing violent marks of derision

An underlying resentment for all of existence
Judging them as plague, or livid pestilence
The human species are vermin and scum
I long for a form of apocalypse to come

Some genocidal wave to wash us away
Ridding this pitiful dirtball of all in a day
Grown too far, has this human parasite
It needs to be stricken down with swift might

I despise all these things that flourish on earth
From every blind opinion to each new birth
Upon viewing the clear reality, I begin to cry
Whispering softly to myself, "I hope we all die.".

Comments

[Mud99]

Scholars Poetry 4/5

[whitejade13]

I hate how people say that poems should be shorter. Sometimes what we feel can't be summed up in just a few lines. Telling someone to change their poem is, in my opinion, like tellin someone to change their feelings. Yes, sometimes we do wish those feelings to change but we feel what we feel. I think this is a very well worded, and emotional poem. 5/5

[Casca 7]

o.o; *pulls out box of anti-depressants* Still really angsty. Also, it's really wordy. Short and simple can often leave a more lasting impression. One question you need to ask yourself is: What is the point of poetry? and Does this poem satisfy this point? (We can pm if you want. ^_^)

[Marionette_Mentation]

i can relate, sometimes we don't see things as we wish to...people are cruel and can be unbearable to be around and so we get so close to melancholy that we wish for nothing but for the earth to parish in flames.