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no matter the terain
he will be there
no matter the strain
he will stand and stare
his shadow touch's everyone
he ride's a mighty horse
even when the battle is won
only the dead are free from war
- Title: war
- Artist: zairaisay
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Description:
this was something i wrote
about the whole war issue
i dont agree with war what so ever
- Date: 02/17/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Zlae - 06/17/2011
- War isn't something you 'agree' or 'disagree' with. It's always there. Small conflicts, to full-scale war. It's there. Those are just words. Where is the feeling? The imagery?
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- shinitai666 - 02/20/2009
- it's just kind of there... Not enough detail to feel anything. The poem is only words, no feeling.
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- U-Got-It-All - 02/20/2009
- im not feelin it
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- lord halford 3 3 3 - 02/17/2009
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yeh war sucks
sometime they'll call a war and no one will come - Report As Spam