hmm

• Artist: x-amiluvshim-x
• Description: (none)
• Date: 02/16/2009
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there is this girl tht crys her self to sleep at night,crys all day tell someone slaps her, then she found a guy tht fell in love with her , she thought it could last for ever and not end,but then he left her and she hung her self and had a note in her pocket it said "he ment the world to me but then he left"

Comments

[StarLight_Angel_07]

They do that ! Next time write him a Love letter with your better grammer.

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Indeed. a journey into the realms of unoriginal and cliche grammatical errors. Spelling mistakes abound. Painful to read.

[fairy crust]

Not written in poetry form and its too short to be a song, and the grammar is horrible, so this cannot be a poem or a song.