Too Late For Broken Souls

• Artist: faux_fur_rabbit
• Description:
• Date: 02/15/2009
• Tags: late broken souls

It's too late now
Well isn't that just sad
You can't save me
From what I've become

I don't know who can,
If anybody, at that
I hope they come soon
If they don't
I'm afraid I might fall
Even more into this pit of...

Comments

[Milke ftw]

i like it (:

[faux_fur_rabbit]

I know it's cliche, but that's how i felt when i wrote this poem. I didn't feel cliche, I felt like nobody could save me from something. I don't know what it was, though.

[jgirl39]

It's kind of cliche, and you need more metaphors. I do like the last line very much, though))