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This story starts with a me
But sadly enough there comes a you
If this competition ever has an end
Ill be happy to get through
And the pressure builds up
Telling tales of destruction
Coz I'm leaving you behind
No way out this time
And its not my fault here
We all are here
We all can see
We all know that
You will be the death of me
You are not here
You cannot see
You don't know
You are the cancer in me
And this story starts again but you dont believe
Any words i say to you
Even if i lied, you wouldn't care
You're becoming numb from all the things you've done
Listen close its soon the end
Shut your mouth and don't pretend
And its not my fault here
We all are here
We all can see
We all know that
You will be the death of me
You are not here
You cannot see
You don't know
You are the cancer in me
I feel you spread through my veins
Nothing i say makes it better
Its all real, even the words I spit through my teeth
And they land in your hands
Read them every night before you go to bed
Maybe you'll think about it all the time
And I'll haunt you like a ghost
Silent screams of...
You can't count on...
We all are here
We all can see
We all know that
You will be the death of me
You are not here
You cannot see
You don't know
You are the cancer in me
Cancer in me
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- Title: Cancer in me
- Artist: ZetaOri
- Description: yar, leave me a comment!! help me improve please!!
- Date: 02/14/2009
- Tags: cancerinme
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Comments (2 Comments)
- AngelofDoe - 03/03/2009
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this is awesome (puts real name here(I'm not sure if u want your real name on here)) It's way better than any of the songs I've written. i was gonna put some of mine up here, but after reading yours, i'm not gonna lol...nah jj. I'll put up da ones on bebo.
Okay, do I have any critisim?
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I can't think of anything that needs tweaking or changing in the song.
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- lil pixy girl - 02/17/2009
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That was amazing! Am I aloud to make a request for a little tweek in the last chorus-thing bit? I want to steel your poem, but I will setel for giving you a thought for that bit!
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