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A plastic smile on my face,
As i stepped though the door.
A quick hello here and there.
Joke to a friend,
Click of a locker,
Doors slamming.
Through out the day only a word every now and then.
No one ever imagined,
What truly when on in my head.
- by bloody_skylar |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/12/2009 |
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- Title: A Plastic Smile
- Artist: bloody_skylar
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Description:
it is nothin special at all
i just did it for school and stuff but i really liked it and hoped you would to
and i bet a lot of people can relate to wat the poem is saying i hope you dont but that is not always the case - Date: 02/12/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- H-Meow - 06/08/2009
- It is very good yes, But not all poems with rymes are cliche! Well maybe but search some of my poems tell me if mine are that way please!
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- Caged_Tulips - 04/18/2009
- This sounds like a lot of the days I experienced when I was in school. Sadly there are a lot of people who feel this way.
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- 1st_sarrow - 02/12/2009
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nice poem your talented with writing writeing and drawing is my thing but it,s a hoppie
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- Skellie Nix - 02/12/2009
- I actually really love it. it's simple, and short. it flows well, it's not ridden with cliche rhymes like so many poems I see now. but most of all it conveys a point and a feeling that I, and many others, have experienced. fix the spelling and it's perfect. thanks for posting this. =]
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