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This silence is pierced with ignorance-
Looking only at the circumstance.
Then realizing it's just that that took you away
And you try to make it seem okay.
First class ticket to your guilt trip-
Thinking somehow it'll make me forget.
But damn you for leaving me here on my own
To be reborn with a heart made of stone.
And damn you for not ever coming back
All the while, promising that..
One day it'd be perfect and we'd never need
Oh and at last- that day's come, indeed.
Because now I'm taking care of myself
And your picture's been taken down from my shelf.
I don't need you any more than you need me;
And that's just the way it's got to be.
And while you're away and I'm left here bleeding,
I'm not needing, but healing- and always concealing.
- Title: Concealing.
- Artist: _Roooose_
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- Date: 02/03/2009
- Tags: concealing
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- Kibroth - 02/11/2009
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Slowly but surely, I'm beggining to understand.
Suggestion(s): Line 3, replacing "just that that" with "precisely that which".
Line 4, adding "yet" after "and".
Are you really healing I wonder?
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 02/10/2009
- I enjoyed this one. Storytelling is my favorite part of poetry.
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- NakedJack - 02/09/2009
- Omg, I knew I favorited you for a reason. This, this poem right here, this poem right here, is amazing! I must have put some THC in my coffee because I enjoyed it way too much.
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