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Poppies bleed petals of sheer excess.
You and I, this sweet battleground
- by -ladyfettx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/31/2009 |
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- Title: So many things...
- Artist: -ladyfettx
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I thought of this haiku when I was with you
I thought of this haiku when I kiss you
I thought of this haiku because I love you... - Date: 01/31/2009
- Tags: many things
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Comments (3 Comments)
- YamiNoHanna - 02/05/2009
- it needs to be 5 7 5 for it to be a haiku sorry but you get nothing from me for that mistake...
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- Zurah - 02/04/2009
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...But that's not a haiku!
5-7-5: learn your syllables. - Report As Spam
- Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights - 02/01/2009
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I thought of this haiku when I kissed you.
Correct tense. - Report As Spam
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