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• Artist: LunaLight_7_13
• Description: i need a title, and I'm horrible at that. . .
  i know it's kinda crappy, but i need a title.
  sorry if this wasted your time, but if you have a title that would fit this, please tell me.
  and tell me if this is crappy, so please!!! rate this as it should, don't sugar coat it.
• Date: 01/26/2009
• Tags: death life

My heart has been torn again, and again, and again,
Disappointment is imprisoned within me again.
Life is cruel,
Life is always blue.
Your can deny it, but
Life is what it is; there are no “buts’”.
Death can bring life,
Life will bring death.
Each unique, each petite.
Each will not live without the other.
Life is a child’s playground,
But it cannot make a sound.
For a sound will bring on death,
And death is not happy.
Death is not life,
Though death can bring a thought,
It should not be sought.
Life should be close at hand,
Living life should not be banned!
Hate should be kicked to the curb,
Happiness should be preserved.
Things should be,
Things shouldn’t be,
Everything imagined could be.
Could be found,
Should be bound,
Would make a sound.
But life is life,
And death is death.
The living should not want death,
And the dead should not want to live.

Comments

[xXTears_Never_StopXx]

hey....ur probably still mad at me but that is really really good....

[emmywinner56]

wow thats SO good!!!maybe you cood call it 'order'?because at the end:'the living should not want death, And the dead should not want to live' thats like, what should happen so that theres order, not chaos...well idk.it was AWESOME but it is hard 2 come up with a title 4 it.

[random_girl_7_13]

i like it, your should be a writer. i'd totally buy your book!!! 5/5 =)