My fantasy world

• Artist: captain sora29
• Description: a strange fantasy world!!!!
• Date: 01/24/2009
• Tags: sora

My fantasy world, every boy every girl, where lions are
free to rome. And i have an eletric comb, where
dragons fly me home. I tell my friends i rather live in my
fantasy world then the real one, But i already do,
sometimes class seams boring so i think about the world i
want to live in. I could have a thousand millions of
money, now that would be awsome!! People laugh people
think,"Why do people think too hard"? I don't i just move on!!
And even you can live in a fantasy world!!!!!!!! biggrin

Comments

[dizjokerkid]

AWESOME! Best ever, 5/5 :]

[Spicesayy]

srry...but poums might not be for you

[Violexant]

When imagination outweights skill, creative ideas can't be expressed in their full potential...Keep writing, you'll catch on...

[L e n n o n xx]

.......... O.O *dies*

[Overworkedandunderpaid]

... What the hell was that? Now in poetry I don't normally tell people they need to work on paragraphing, I only say that to the idiots writing short stories but... wow... I was blown away by your complete lack/misuse of grammar, spelling, capitalization, sense of style and talent. If I could give you a lower than one rating, I would.