The Garden of Eden

• Artist: Sir Volacei
• Description: Eh, why should I tell you? If I told you you wouldn't be curious. ;) (If this is right by the poem then oops) Here's a hint to make the poem better; compare the plants to people.
• Date: 01/23/2009
• Tags: garden eden flowers pretty beautiful

The Garden of Eden


The Garden of all
the prettiest ever seen.
Called the Garden of Eden
all pretty and green.

Day to day
more roses die.
Thrown away
for being ugly like hay
or clipped for the beauty of hi
just to be forgotten in the decaying May.

Tulips that once thrived together
cut apart
to droop and weep
in separate vases
because of their
different cases.

Hardy vines
crorageously climbing the wall
always to be cut down
before meeting their goal
because they were said to be toes out of lines
and overshadowing the dull shine of the all
with it's steadfast determination.

Plastic bouquets
tossed in the trash
accused of not being real
or possesing the ability
to wonderously feel.

And weeds.
Ripped out of their rightful home the ground
told simply they did not belong
although they were the most strong
of all numbers.

Which goes to show
even the most marvelous garden of all
is not the prettiest thing
and will not make a precious ring
in the form
of a complicated song.

Comments

[Dragons_rule_the_sky]

wonderful comparisons. it has a nice flow. id say more, but im still soaking it in

[Sir Volacei]

Yup, the description's right by the poem. xd