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My tears drop like the rain,
Like the rain that night,
When we laid there on the Hill.
Do you remember?
The night we lay there under the stars,
Letting the rain poor down on us,
Not caring how wet we were?
How I said 'I love you.'
You smiled and said it back?
When you looked deep into my eyes,
For those long few seconds?
Then,
You finally stopped your gaze,
Leaned forward,
And Kissed me?
My tears drop like the rain,
Like the rain that night,
When we laid there on the Hill.
Do you remember?...
- by volo libero |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/20/2009 |
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- Title: Special Night
- Artist: volo libero
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Description:
It's about a daydream about my boyfriend.
Comments; not harsh, but tell me what I can improve on, please. - Date: 01/20/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Dissolve the Pain - 01/25/2009
- pretty darn awesome! thats so sweet smile 5/5
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- volo libero - 01/20/2009
- Yea, but my friend told me to use a thesaurus sometimes. ._____.' But thank you. (:
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- Nuhaix - 01/20/2009
- good i have no comments on how you can improve because heartful writers write the best things write from your heart
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