- Is the life that we live is that all their is? The pain the I feel is it real? The hate in my heart is that the real me or is it my other me? What is life really? How do u define life? Is it by the way you live? This world is full of hatred and pain, I'm waiting for it to be over. I say if we let love into our heart their will be no more war, hate, and pain. That is why i live my life in love the love that is kind, good, peaceful, easy going, and pure.
- by Ryan The Insane |
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- | Submitted on 01/19/2009 |
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- Title: Life
- Artist: Ryan The Insane
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- Date: 01/19/2009
- Tags: life
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- nikolyn1 - 06/21/2009
- yh, i agree.. i also lyk ur poem but i felt pushed to read on.
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- Stupified DisturbedOne - 05/17/2009
- I like the message that your perceiving. I like how it starts off negative and you end it positively by how life should be lived. My only criticism is that there would be a couple more rhymes to keep the attention of the reader. I also saw a couple small grammar mistakes but thats an easy fix.
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