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• Artist: A Stranger Raven
• Description: More feelings in the dead of night.
• Date: 01/19/2009
• Tags: words feelings love

Always knew the right words to say,
How to make them dance, swing, and sway.

They circle around your head like smoke,
Never figured you'd be the one broke.

Deceiving beauty from beginning to end,
Who knew you'd be my new trend.

Whispering, "I love you..." in the dead of night,
Dressing up to be the best sight.

Turning you into the sight of the day,
You watch my hips swing as I walk away.

Comments

[x_iiSnowflake]

Woah. This is by far one of the best poems I've read today. Deep, thoughtful, dark, depressing. Good form, good stanzas, and good choice of words.
I love it.