Wilted Happiness

• Artist: Aziin Z
• Description: One day, I stayed up the whole night,
  thinking about the phone call that just ended.
  It was a horrible and excruciating conversation.
  The sun rose and I looked out my window.
  Suddenly, a poem dawned on me...
• Date: 01/09/2009
• Tags: wilted happiness lost

Witled Happiness

The bright sun shines but it cannot reach,
The deep dark recesses of a blackened hole,
it cannot breach.
Melancholy,
Sadness,
my sigh reveals,
What an unhappy smile crumbles to conceal.
For what began as great, gold, and shining,
Shrank into rusty brass and wilted dying.
But care four you I still do,
even though I dared to wait.
Now time has passed and it seems at last,
that I suffer an untimely fate.
To bloom into a passionate red rose is what I wished,
but now it seems,
That to rely on wishes without action,
is no way to dream.

Comments

[Marionette_Mentation]

ok i know i said that your last poem was my favorite poem on gaia but i changed my mind this one is. this one expresses something that the entire world needs to comprehend!

[X_Midnight_Wind_X]

it's so sad... must have been really bad. beautiful, but sad