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heart shattered,
into a million,
untouchable pieces.
so sharp are they.
none but one can fix the broken pieces.
and he is unwilling to fix the fixable.
so i guess,
im unfixable,
permanately broken.
so throw me away.
im no use.
no use to any one...
i never was,
and never will be.
so abuse me,
so torment me,
misuse me.
im already broken.
so treat me like trash.
because,
apparently,
thats all i am to you,
and so,
i am broken.
and thats all i ever will be.
- by Daddy Got This Account |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/04/2009 |
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- Title: broken
- Artist: Daddy Got This Account
- Description: hey! ok, so i gotta vent. ^^" sorry. ^^ this is how i feel right now. so, by all means, COMMENT!!!! ^^
- Date: 01/04/2009
- Tags: broken
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Comments (6 Comments)
- 290DarkStars - 05/22/2009
- Yeah, ^^ I'm right once more. Your poetry rocks... HEY! anyone who reads this... go to Lunar_Eclipse's gallery and 5star everything that she has... trust me... she deserves it x3
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- Daddy Got This Account - 04/02/2009
- well, thanks. ^^ i dont normally get such heart-filled comments on my work. and yeah, i agree with you. self examination, IS a poem, all in its self.
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- 290DarkStars - 04/01/2009
- You have felt that feeling as well. (*sigh*) I dont want to bore you...but note that your self examination and pure soul creates poem, unlike most gaytards on gaia that post "poetry". I admit that I sometimes dont look at the heart behind something in a poem. but I know that you are destined to be a great person.
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- Deshi_Venshin594 - 02/18/2009
- Its very emotional and personal its a great expressive poem
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- CaucasianNoodles - 01/16/2009
- Omg thats sad. sad But its really good sis. <3 it!!!
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- RisexWithxthexDead - 01/16/2009
- 3rd 5/5 for you
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