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So you take the dager
and thrust is straight,unfaltering,buried to the hilt
in my heart.
can you hear it?
the sik thud, the trickle of my blood?
can you feel it?
the warm wet feeling on your hand, in your eyes?
look up
deep in my eyes.
can you see?
whatch as my life my love my hate my very soul
dranes into my heart
and over your hand
where it finally falls to the dirt
where it belongs.
NO...
- by Sid the Body Gaurd |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/04/2009 |
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- Title: BETRAYAL
- Artist: Sid the Body Gaurd
- Description: this was for a lost GF. pay atention to the last line its Urs to interpret.
- Date: 01/04/2009
- Tags: betrayal
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/16/2009
- that is exactly wot betrayal feels like. and as for the the last line "NO..." thats very new, but interesting i luv it
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- Sid the Body Gaurd - 01/08/2009
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like I sayd "bleeding hearts"
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- tampico-chan - 01/08/2009
- ive read all your poems so far, and this is my definite favorite. i interperet the 'NO' as someone who knows what is happening and what is to come, and his death and doom, but he wishes it were not true. wishes it could be avoided...
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- Sid the Body Gaurd - 01/05/2009
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thats deep.
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- Oricalcon - 01/04/2009
- It portrays a sense of helplessness, it seems to me that the person who, in a sense, recieved the knife has become nothing more than an empty shell. And, yet, this person was able to show signs of life again, to be reborn enough to begin the journey for a new life, this second sentence is all I percieved from the last sentence, its how I see it.
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- Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX - 01/04/2009
- very deep i like it
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