Can't Figure You Out

• Artist: crooked_signal
• Description: I wrote this for a guy whom I'm absolutely crazy about but just won't respond to me. This expresses my frustration. Hope it's still within Arena rules.
• Date: 01/03/2009
• Tags: scrutinize analyse realize

I want to see you bare
To seperate you from your skin
To tear through your muscles
To strip you bare to the bone
I want to crack open your skull
To hold your mind
To read your thoughts
To learn how you work

I want to see you bare
Bare to your soul
Bare to your very essence
To strip you to nothing but air
To examine what's left
That cannot be seen by the naked eye

I want to see you bare
To analyse, to scrutinize, to realize
As you crawl to seek cover
Trying to conceal yourself from the world
I want to see you;
I want to see through you

I want to see you bare
Stripped, and left with nothing else
I want to see you squirm under the light
I want to watch you struggle
As you fight for safety
I want to hear you scream
As I strip you bare
To learn who you really are
Burrowed deep wthin your ashened bones

Comments

[Ocean Torent]

It does kind of sound like you don't like this person....Sorry but it seems a little weird to me..

[xo-iToxic Rainbow-ox]

thats pretty good..
you use the word bare too much tho
maybe vary it a bit. smile

[Sparkly Tits]

wow. sounds like anger :/
i dont wantto be that person XD
btw, read mines? :3

[Hawkbri]

ooooooh! I kinda like where this is going razz

just kidding! but I must say, I like your poem!