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Morning
As morning dew turns evening deed, life swirls in a torrent of confusion, losing, who knew? meeting basic need can become hard with delusion
as the deed turns south and is one with the eve, urges may come out, begging for reprieve
when southern spirit stones weigh heavily on the mind, and the answers, there are none to find, recall the memories of happiness and bind, hold fast to the dreams and finish the grind
as an eve's grind comes to an end, and fruits of harvest are naught to show...sacred memories can calm and fend, fend off an unrewarded shadow.
As the darkness takes grasp, and weariness sets in, the shadows that clasp shan't stay against you to fight, because there can be no shadow in absence of the light.
- by Cottoncandyocbra3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/02/2009 |
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- Title: Morning
- Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
- Description: Something old
- Date: 01/02/2009
- Tags: morning
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Comments (6 Comments)
- SirynECrow - 04/11/2009
- "because...light" seems to be the end of a lecture to someone. ^^ Not horrid, I actually like it. Unfortunately it bugs me that I can't find what I want to say about it. I do like it....however, there is a "but"--I just don't know what it is.
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- Bleuraven123 - 01/05/2009
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yes, it is really ended well....all of your poems are, actually...
just simply amazing. - Report As Spam
- dreamerlove8 - 01/03/2009
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ur poems take me away.
take my breath and capture my mind.
as i leave the rest of the world behind.
xD<3 - Report As Spam
- Wicker Chair - 01/02/2009
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I agree with the below
i won't say it's like shakespeare but it's quite incredible. - Report As Spam
- popololomama - 01/02/2009
- Very well composed. Its like Shakespeare. Very witty and clever.
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- whitejade13 - 01/02/2009
- Omigod! This is wonderful! Absolutely stunningz! I love how you ended the poem. 5/5
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