mother stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

• Artist: Ms Make Me Smile
• Description: my mothers said things like this sometimes and she cant see what it does to me and me syblings.dont judge my mother unless you know her which you dont.so rate and comment its a big deal to me.
• Date: 12/31/2008
• Tags: mother stop

you said ill kill myself
you siad ill have a heart attack
you cried and cried
you felt sorry for yourself so much
yet you never thought what it did to us

did you ever think
what saying ill kill myself did to your own daughter
did you ever think the heart ache of hearing you say
ill have a heart attack would give us the heart attack

but what would you do if it suddenly all happened
happened to us
ill kill myself
shell have a heart attack
then who would you cry to
you only have us
so keep us
keep us
stop destroying us
you need us
as much as we need you

a child should never lose a mother
but should a mother lose a child?
if that mother spoke only tears to the child
did the mother desreve the child
i think not

so please mother
if you ever want to see us walk through life
and make you proud
then let us be proud
make us proud by stopping
stopping the tears
stopping it all

your sorrow is our sorrow
more than youll ever know
this much we swear

Comments

[Pokaberry]

wonderful. bold. totally original. 5 stars

-thinks of overdone love poetry and shudders-

[wildflower2828]

It is very powerful stuff!

[tsdramaqueen925]

Very powerful stuff! I liked it ♪♫♪♫

[The Velvet Desire]

Cool

[Wicker Chair]

normally, i say that rhyme and meter is important, but when there's this much emotion and feeling in it, it's beautiful anyways.