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A rain of petals.
One by one they drop.
And I think of him
as they hit the blacktop.
His smile, his laugh
How he was nice to me
How he still cared, even
when he broke my heart totally.
The last petal left
and my heart is dead taut.
As it drops to the floor, I realize
He loves me not.
- by badjuju_monkey |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/30/2008 |
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- Title: He Loves Me Not?
- Artist: badjuju_monkey
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Description:
You know that game where you pluck flower petals saying, "He loves me, he loves me not" ?
Well, this poem is about that. It reflects the thoughts of a person playing this game. This is my first submission, and I realize it's not as great as it could be, but I hope you rate fairly! Thanks!
P.S. This poem is also on my deviantART gallery. - Date: 12/30/2008
- Tags: poem badjujumonkey flower love
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Comments (6 Comments)
- -xky0ko-chanx- - 01/02/2009
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oooooo...i think i know who that might be >___<
its a good poem lili!
lol u want me to go tell darian to read this and vote? lol j/k j/k j/k...sorry..that wuznt a laughing matter...nvm biggrin - Report As Spam
- XiaoKittyCat - 01/01/2009
- Wow. That's really good...
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- funnyflex - 12/31/2008
- ah that is so cute........but so sad too. that's a brill poem u got there!
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- Favencia - 12/31/2008
- Oh, it's dead cute!!! And good. Well done =]
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- badjuju_monkey - 12/30/2008
- thanks!
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- U-kno-U-want-2-B-me - 12/30/2008
- thats really good. i luv it.
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