Oxy Moron

• Artist: Silynce
• Description: This is a song I wrote for the band I'm in, Paradox, to my ex-boyfriend. And yes, I realize an oxy moron is a type of paradox. I personally think it sounds better with the melody, but I don't have the sheet music to use as a Ref image since i didn't make one. Enjoy!
• Date: 12/28/2008
• Tags: paradox oxymoron

You're pretty Ugly
Intelligently Dumb
You say that You hate me
And yet I'm the one
You say that you'd date me
Well this should be fun
You're an Oxy Moron

You gossip about me behind my back
About all my friends you decide to talk smack
You write love poems and try for my attention
This is beyond my comprehension

You're pretty Ugly
Intelligently Dumb
You say that You hate me
And yet I'm the one
You say that you'd date me
Well this should be fun
You're an Oxy Moron

You're obnoxious you're sweet
You sweep me off my feet
and you make me fall

You're pretty Ugly
Intelligently Dumb
You say that You hate me
And yet I'm the one
You say that you'd date me
Well this should be fun
You're an oxy moron
an oxy Moron
An oxy moron
An oxy moron
You're an oxy moron... and i'm done.

Comments

[Silynce]

You obviously know nothing of poetry..Capitalization means emphasis...as do the line breaks. And It's not spoken, it's sung. Note that it is a song. Most people do not talk while holding a guitar with a drummer in the background and a bassist by their side.

[ChibiGinie]

the first thing that caught my attention was that Oxy Moron should not be capitalized or spaced; it should be all one word. The rhymes are unnatural and chunky. Nobody talks that way. All in all though it's a cute lyric. 4/5

[ii-MidnightAngel-ii]

i absolutely love it 5/5 thats really good its the best 1 ive read all day

[Silynce]

could you please comment when you vote? xia xia!