Seclusion

• Artist: Aramaki Kotone
• Description: A poem to describe the feeling of lonelyness, which we all feel at some point in out lives, some more than others.
  
• Date: 12/26/2008
• Tags: seclusion lonelyness love

My heart is an empty region
Desolate, abandoned and alone
A place that remains unvisited
Where no man cares to roam

My love is an unwanted entity
Discarded, rejected and ignored
A gift that’s long gone wasted
Into which my soul is poured

My life is encased in darkness
Bleak, lifeless and dim
An existence left unacknowledged
Which remains invisible to him.

Comments

[Vipers Flame]

Its really good, and it describes how I feel all the time.

[Arc En Licorne]

amazing!! i can really feel the pain & i luv it thats how i feel & have been feeling 4 a very long time.

[HeartInHandNotInMouth]

thats very...... depressing.... i used to write poems like this to get out my feelings instead of taking it out on others or showing people what kind of affect they have on me. becuz the ppl who cuz this kind of pain, r the ones who want to c it more and more. very percise, i like it :]

[Tsenzori Yu]

very very harsh. >.<