Take a break

• Artist: tiffaninini
• Description: This is another song that my eight year old cousin Kaitlyn wrote. It's called "Take a Break". Please Rate and Comment. She wants to see your thoughts ^.^
• Date: 12/26/2008
• Tags: take break tiffaninini relax kaitlyn

Take a break, take a chance
Take me some where I can be free
You never know if the world is spinning every day
Take a break and relax
don't put everything on your mind
Take your heart to your mind

why don't you look through my eyes
so I can

Take a break, take a chance
I'll take you where you can be free
We'll never know if the world is spinning every day
Take a break and relax
we won't put everything on our minds
And take your heart to your mind

Hold my hands, tightly and close
Don't ever let go
No, no, no
Together we can be free- ee

Take a break, take a chance
I'll take you where you can be free
We'll never know if the world is spinning every day
Take a break and relax
we won't put everything on our minds
And take your heart to your mind

Don't ever let go again
Stay with me forever

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Comments

[Tsumi-luv]

I luv the song It's amazing

[Becoming_Nobody]

It is very repetitive and has little flow, rhyme, or rhythm. The lyrics themselves are good but try to make it all flow with everything else a bit better. I love the meaning of the song it is wonderful, so other than that wonderful job I applaud her!