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This is dedicated to the most important person in my life:
When you were here...
Oh I remember you clear
you held me in your arms so near so near...
You taught me the importance of life and how to live it
you reassured me when I was scared to have no fear
I visited you once every week in that
cold cold jail house
yet you were always there with that smiling happy face
such a happy smile
never failed to lift my spirits
But one terrible, fateful day came
to find my dear mother in tears then something completed my fears
You told my mother you were soon going to pass but she thought you
was just playing
And now I right this poem saying:
Your life was taken oh so coldly
Yet you stood so boldly
You fought with all your might
but it wasn't enough
and now I have to stand crying over your body
When you were here things were always peaceful
What he did to you was so wrong and deceitful
I will always cherish those happy memories
those happy times
I know your in a better place filled with trumpet chimes,
and angels and beauty
but I will never forget you for
I love you dearly
When you were here my heart would sing
and now a churchbell ring
ring ding ring ding
Goodbye I will miss you so
and our love for you will continue to grow
So...
farewell dad and I will always love you.
~Richard Rodriguez~
A loving Dad...
And a wonderful friend
- by Chi_Persecon |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/24/2008 |
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- Title: When You Were Here
- Artist: Chi_Persecon
- Description: This poem is to help you realize that when someone real close to you pass and dissapears and the importance of coping with that gaping hole in your heart. I know how it feels because I remember one of my closest relatives' life was taken viciously and terribly but I moved on yet I will always remember that person forever in my heart.
- Date: 12/24/2008
- Tags: someone close dissapears
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Comments (4 Comments)
- yonnygirl123 - 01/09/2009
- wow...that's sooo raw...cause i can just see it happening anytime, anywhere, and to anyone.....
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- XXExtremelyDistraughtXX - 12/25/2008
- OMG Wonderfu youe poem is so moving and heartwrming yet sad at the same time it really expresses your emotions.
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- XtremeTomGirl - 12/25/2008
- That is so beautiful brings tears to my eyes yet it's warming and lifts my heart I love it!
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- getawayifyouwant2live - 12/25/2008
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Beautiful just beautiful It makes me think...
plzzzzzzz i have to see more poems by you! - Report As Spam