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I had a feeling that you were comming.
I searched for thousands of years.
Then I finally found you.
I gave you my hand and you took it.
Im here for you Im your source of hope.
I will be with you for FOREVER...
- by Die Schweiz |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/24/2008 |
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- Title: Ill be there
- Artist: Die Schweiz
- Description: I just did this after seeing a really cute vid of Jasper and Alice
- Date: 12/24/2008
- Tags: there jasper alice
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Nyxs_Ace - 03/01/2009
- nice. but perhaps adding a few more lines could make it be a bit better smile 5 stars
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- saphire_ninja99 - 12/27/2008
- aaawww....its hecka cute! i like it.
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- Nikki4815 - 12/26/2008
- It's nice. I like it, but you could change your word choice up a bit, try and make it flow better, and it could be really good. This is like a cake in the oven. It's half way done. It tases good now, but you know it will be better when its finished, and I don't feel like this is finished. 4/5, but I smell a 5/5 on it's way. Send me a PM with a link to let me know when the cake is done! Rate back? Check out my gallery.
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- Die Schweiz - 12/25/2008
- Hey if you want Id like to know what you think...If I should do it again XD
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