my reflection

• Artist: loverboy8888
• Description: what does the lover see in the mirror when everything that he defined himself by is gone when his lover leaves him without a prayer
• Date: 12/20/2008
• Tags: reflection

i look into the broken glass my reflection battered by sordid past

and as i look into my bloodshot eyes

something deep inside me dies

left behind are my shattered dreams replaced by painful memories

of one my soul just cant forget and who's love has left an ever lasting imprint

lost within my own stare i see a fire thats left me bare

Comments

[haileykayy]

(:

[Kitkat192001]

but it's important to get your point across! Ah well, still a good poem. How did you think of this anyways?

[XxNemuri_AkiraxX]

ohh wow, that's really good. definately 5 stars. you should see about getting that published.

[RasorBlades XxJamesxX]

He is very right about that... I never worry about punc.

[loverboy8888]

if theres one thing that i hate about these things is puncuation seriously true writers hurridly write and dont think about punc. merely the idea if you do you might lose some of the originality plus there are allways editors

[Wolfriver]

watch for punctuation errors