White Knight

• Artist: Jackie Nemo
• Description: Feel free to comment how ever you'd like. Negativity or criticism do not bother me.
  
  This is MY work... do not attempt to plagiarize.
  http://paperdoll68.deviantart.com/art/white-knight-17121324
• Date: 12/17/2008
• Tags: white knight

waiting next to you..
waiting for the next move..
holding on tightly to what sanity I sill have left..
watching you watch me crumble.
letting you listen to a filtered version..
hearing myself scream asleep..

the want is so much
the need is still there
the past is an ever ravenous obstacle

you hear their filtered versions
you think your own opinions
what is the real truth?
to know nothing is real

a desire so strong you can taste it
a desire of unrequited amore

twin flames dance in the eternal sky
out of reach for now
holding onto what sanity is left

come white knight
save me from this hollowed hole
dug so deep yet so shallow
drowning is just another form of escape

Comments

[RavenaRayne]

This is great. There really is nothing that could be done to make it better; your word choice and descriptions are beautiful, and you have good repitition of lines. I loved this

[ElectraShocked]

oooo, i like it.
btw, I saw ur pic and your really pretty XD.

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[XxiCute_PoisonxX]

i really really love iit
but can you pplllz tell me what it's about=/