Thoughts of the world

• Artist: AngelisXIII
• Description: Its a lyric speech I made for a class in school and now I want you opinion. thses are lyrics from songs I enjoy made into a poem.
• Date: 12/17/2008
• Tags: thoughts world

Let me apologize to begin with
Let me apologize for what I’m about to say
I look around me but all I seem to see
Is people going nowhere, expecting sympathy
Can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean
If I’m not free to be as twisted as I want to be
Even loved ones scatter like flower petals from my hand
So even if I were to carve the meaning I lived into my left hand it would all be counted as flowers of vanity.
Heaven’s a lie
But hell ain’t a bad place to be
Guess what I’m still living
So why don’t you pity me?
I shrink my obligations
I miss all your deadlines
I have no interest in you
Or any of your “holy” designs
I’ll tell you now I’m the one to survive
Somewhere out there a devil cries
So do me a favor wipe the tears from your eyes
We dug our graves so lets lie down and die.I spent my years wondering in the dark, but how we survive is what makes us who we are.

Comments

[edie95]

that is good writing but a terrible topic we do not have to live in the graves we dug but crawl out of them into a new life new light for us to see
you see we can fix out wrongs but only if we have the desire to do so
did u completely rechange the lyrics or just move them around
and do u feel they have meaning to u