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tab My love ...
A man may say in most wonderous speech, that for thee, he will lay his life aside.
tab He may say, he will walk a thousand miles just be by your side.
A man may utter sweet nothings in your ears,
tab He may utter soft words only your heart is meant to hear.
A man may praise you, while drooling like a dog does.
tab He may praise you, with endless babble like every other fool has done.
A man may love you, He may be faithful and true,
tab He may love you and recite sweet poetry for you.
But I my love, have layed my life, my pride, and my ambitions aside.
tab I have made vows and shouted them into the skies.
Unlike every other man My Love, I have praised you in eloquent prose,
tab With words, not babble, that my own hand has wrote.
tab So in this, My companion and friend, I declare my love for you
tab A love that shall last untill all the world has forgotten both me and you.
- by Chasing the Daylight |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/15/2008 |
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- Title: A man may ...
- Artist: Chasing the Daylight
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Description:
I worte this for my wife for christmas ... I think it came out good!
Please please please comment and vote on it I dont want to give her crap-ola >.<
Thanks!
Lorena Soileau - AKA- Kai Neila - Date: 12/15/2008
- Tags: romance love sacrifice
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Chasing the Daylight - 12/17/2008
- yes I just like the way the end rhyme closes it out
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- Chibi Flux Capacitor - 12/15/2008
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very good =o
...though, on the seventh stanza, was the end rhyme supposed to be that way as if to illustrate your style?
5/5 anyways =) - Report As Spam
- shoogah-baybee - 12/15/2008
- not bad! its nice! i like it! 4/5
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