You're not here anymore

• Artist: meimihaneoka69962
• Description: Emptiness.
• Date: 12/14/2008
• Tags: youre here anymore

I'd love you with all of my heart
But you're not here anymore.
I'd hold you so we wouldn't part
But you're not here anymore.
I need you to hold me in place
But you're not here anymore.
I wish you'd gently brush my face
But you're not here anymore.

Comments

[Confizzled_Claustrophobic]

Adjectives. 4/5

[Violexant]

I'd change the second line to something like "But you're hearts no longer here." and so on with every even line describing a part of him not being there. But I like the message.