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in my soul, i see a light, a shadow also, dark as night
i observe them both and then i see, the battle waged inside of me.
so with you i shall confide, that in my soul they both reside
so i ask you all my friends, which will triumph in the end?
will light outshine the dark and prevail, or will it be overshadowed and fail?
i cannot see the future now, when will this war end and how?
- by Blayd iskander |
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- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: The battle
- Artist: Blayd iskander
- Description: i started writing and this is what came out
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: battle
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Reks S Hatake - 12/27/2008
- Hm... I didn't exactly understand it very much, (I have a hard time understanding most poetry) but it did rhyme well! Good job!
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- TheQuietDisaster - 12/15/2008
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WOW!!!
that's sooo tru
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- AmbuhLynn - 12/13/2008
- I agree too. I really like this, everyone's good and evil, it's not exactly that you decide whether or not you will be good or evil on a certain day or not, you can't predict the future or decide your exact fate.
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- Theater_princess89 - 12/13/2008
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yea, i totally agree...there is a lot of good and evil...you did a really good job!!! biggrin
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- Blayd iskander - 12/13/2008
- thanks smile i guess it's true, there's good and evil in us all, that's why i believe that no one person is better than any other
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- Fraziek - 12/13/2008
- Wow, i really like this and u can get a lot from this...good job
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