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Last Thoughts
My life has ended,
I can see the light,
Please don't cry,
And don't lose sight,
Of that blue sky,
In which i fall,
I will find peace,
In my buried hall.
- by Phantom Geass |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Last Thoughts - 2nd Draft
- Artist: Phantom Geass
- Description: I have made minor changes
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: last thoughts draft
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Phantom Geass - 12/28/2008
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no offense but it isnt a happy poem
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- PinkFire07 - 12/27/2008
- depressing.
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- xXxKiss_Me_GoodbyexXx - 12/19/2008
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wow! its so well written and beautiful. 5/5! good luck
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- Phantom Geass - 12/12/2008
- i write the poem when i was feeling suicidal about 3 months ago, i had a thing for poetry at school so i write poems based on my emotions at the current time
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- Kitthe - 12/12/2008
- sean why do you whrite this sad? why does it seem like you are saying farewell?
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