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I'm curious as to why
Your stench still lingers on my mind,
Our romance ended long ago,
But the cause I've yet to find.
How many years must pass me by
Before I can finally decide
To leave this fairy-tale that's gone awry,
And leave all hope behind.
Logically, this makes no sense,
I can see it in my head;
We're a modern Romeo and Juliet,
We'd both just end up dead.
Sometimes though, secretly I wish
That there was something left for us to save,
Besides your breathless departing obsceneties
And the debts you've left unpaid.
My brain and heart are torn apart,
My mind knows I've been used.
You've cast away my bleeding heart,
And left me here, abused.
Though somehow still, all carnage laid aside,
I manage to glimpse inside your heart,
The good left hidden deep inside.
So while I'm being scolded by my mind,
Still I yearn to have you by my side,
We can leave this wreckage all behind,
And into the sunset, we can ride.
- by Brutal Destiny |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/11/2008 |
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- Title: Romeo and Juliet:The FINAL Act
- Artist: Brutal Destiny
- Description: poem I came up with about how hard it is to let go of a relationship, no matter how painfully dreadful the relationship was...
- Date: 12/11/2008
- Tags: romeo julietthe final
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Cat of Ice - 09/21/2010
- lol this reminds me of talor swifts song about romeo and juliet. i dont think anyone told her that they both kill themselfs. but i totaly see where youre going with this poem. its is hard to let go
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- Lady Alice Road Kamelot - 01/19/2009
- This was awesome! I liked it a lot.
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- Brutal Destiny - 12/14/2008
- someone plz comment sad
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