Shh...Hush....

• Artist: turning it upside-down
• Description: I wrote this at school....It's sort of about two characters in stories I've written...I'm talking to Ashlyn (the first response), then Ella (the second response), then both...Enjoy! And plz comment?
• Date: 12/10/2008
• Tags: shhhush

Shh...Shh...
Quiet...Quiet...
you don't have to yelll...
I hear you crying...
It'll be ok...
It'll be ok...

NO!!
NO!!
It's not ok!
You don't get it!
See what happened?!
See what's wrong?!
See what I did?!
I suck!! I'm an idiot!
It'll never be ok!!

Hush...Hush...
You need to go home...
He wants to change...
He loves you...
He means it this time...
He'll stick to it...
It'll be ok...
It'll be ok...

You don't know!
You don't know!
I can't go home!
He'll never change!
He's never loved me!
He never will!
He can't mean it!
He'll never stick to it!
It'll never be ok!!

Shh...Hush...
Calm down...
Think it through...
Don't jump ahead...
Give it a chance...
Take a deep breath...
Remember who you are...
You can do it...
You can make it...
It'll be ok...
It'll be ok...

Comments

[turning it upside-down]

Lhikan, I was comforting Ashlyn first, then Ella, then both.

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Felt more like a song. I think you need to work on more interesting dialogue... 1/5.

[AH-Closed]

So who is the one being comforting? I love it...col mi tamber!

[turning it upside-down]

Thanks! That was a very fast response...And I made up Ella and Ashlyn both as sort of a part of me...So each of them is in a place that I have been or am in. Thankyou again for your comments!

[ushey of darkness]

i like it its kinda sad and its kinda like my life n.n 5/5 ~

[freaky_hardcore_13]

I really like it alot!! nice job! 5/5 4 u!!

1st Comment!!! *dances* WOO HOOOO!!