A mistake.

• Artist: JacobxPerri
• Description: this is a poem I wrote about a mistake I made.
  
  
  Enjoy...
• Date: 12/10/2008
• Tags: mistake

I sit her alone as tears well up in my eyes.

As I came to terms and realize

that what I did was wrong

and now I can't say sorry

cause now your long gone

Comments

[Sariel Nicolai]

I think you did good.

[II Laffeh II]

niice..but u should fix it alittle

[Tsuki Kurai]

-.o
You seriously need to work on your stuff. the meter is all messed up, i see typos,an it doesnt rhyme all that well.

[x_iMooMooMilk_x]

i really like it alot!