Just once . . .

• Artist: Kitty_Want_Hugs_XD
• Description: I was supose to be writing a poem for my Reading class, but. . . yea, i kept writng things i'd never have the guts to turn in. This is one of the poems i ended up writing. Please comment and rate. and give me some writing advice if you have any. <3
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: just once answers hope love

Just once,
I wanna have my own space when im feeling down
I wanna be left alone, not surrounded by other.
Not being asked why im always upset.

Just once,
i'd like someone to talk to.
Someone i could look in the eye and tell all my worries.
Someone who i know wont judge me.
Who's always there for me.

Just once,
I wanna hang with my friends and have a good time.
I want to go where i want, when i want.
I dont wanna have limits.

Just once,
i wanna be free.
I want to enjoy life and always see it at its best.

Just once,
I don't wanna be so confused.
i don't wanna worry all the time.
I don't wanna cry every night.

Just once,
I wish i could face the fact.
I'm never getting out.
i'll never be free.
I'll never find someone who likes me for me.
. . .
And then it happen.
So amazing how even
the smallest spark of hope
could make someone feel so free.

Odd, how it only took one person
Just one
To give the hope that was lost for so long.

And then comes the question.
How long?

How long will this wonderful feeling last.?
Will the promises made be kept?
So many questions
and. . .

just once,
I wish i knew the answers.

Comments

[x-iiDee Druhh]

Kitty, thats amazing. You always have me. I'll never judge you. And if I do do that im sorry. Your a great best friend. I never want you out of my life. I'm so glad we going to the same high school. I really don't wanna let you go thank you. This poem is like how i feel sometimes i always get judged. =[
It sucks. I hope you never go through my pain. And i'm sorry for draging you into it...really I am. Ily kitty. *huggles*

[7-3-21-13x]

This poem is great. I'd ssay you don't really need any advice.

[Kitty_Want_Hugs_XD]

Thanks dude. I'll be sure to watch the grammer.
x3

[Infected2Me]

Very well done! I saw a grammar mistake, maybe two, but it did not detract from the poem at all! Good job and keep up the good work! ^_^