Love and Hate

• Artist: VampireXLover1
• Description: When people love you or when people hate you. Which one is it?
• Date: 12/08/2008
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When people ignore you
and don't like you.
When people reconized
for who you are.
When people depise
you so much.
When people are grateful
you are alive.
When people wish you
were dead.
When people love you and
hate you .
What do you do with these
emotions?
What?
Just wait till you
die.

Comments

[venomous_bride]

i get waht you were tryign to say with this poem and i relate, but i feel like the format and wording was wrong.

[RocknRollBunny]

5/5, It was very true but it didn't go together well. I can't really explain but still I give you 5/5

[Nikki4815]

Uh, it's okay, but it doesn't flow very well. Poems don't have to rhyme, and I understand this, but people usually try to follow a syllable pattern when they don't rhyme. 3/5. Rate back? Check out my gallery.